User blog comment:Goldeaglefire1/A Tale of Adventure And Folly/@comment-28920015-20170529053928/@comment-26892768-20170529134922

I did take the time to make some edits so that the first chapter wasn't just the original story all over again (making Jimmy's username shorter, sprucing up the dialogue between the Narrator and Jimmy, changing some of the wording to sound less awkward...), so I can see why.