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Hmmm...well, I'd say how the story is depends on the execution. For example, since the toys are alive, what do they do, then? Do they just cause some minor inconviences for our main protagonists that they have to explain away to onlookers, or are they up to something more sinister?

For example, let's say that the toys are trying to free the actual animatronics at Freddy's - maybe they think the animatronics are their parents or something; could lead to a few jokes, if nothing else - every night, and the teenagers have to go after them to ensure that the toys don't succeed. So, not only do they have to recapture the toys, they have to avoid the free-roaming animatronics and the night guard's cameras. I mean, they are trespassing, after all. The night guard isn't just there to watch the animatronics all night. And even when they succeed, they then have to deal with the inevitable sleep deprivation, and have to come up with explanations as to why their grades are slipping because they keep falling asleep in class. So, in other words, a problem that's a danger to them physically (because killer animatronics), and damaging them emotionally (because they have to keep the fact that their toys are alive a secret, and dealing with their shenanigans is having an affect on their grades). Now that would be an interesting way to go with the premise of "FNaF toys come to life; owners must keep it a secret".

...Why yes, I am interested in writing, why do you ask?

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