Board Thread:Roleplay/@comment-31571738-20170426124306/@comment-25681121-20170426154308

Goldeaglefire1 wrote: (...I am not going to comment on the argument going on right now.)

(I will comment on the grammar, however.)

(The italics are my corrections.)

("Screw it I'm borde" = "Screw it, I'm bored.")

("Plot: long long ago in the midevil time there was war against Antros (Human animals, Like Animatronics but alive and no metal) and Dragons ( cuz IDC) until one person bonded with a Dragon and now in the mondern time there were people called Dragon riders who roam the earth.. destiny will place Different people and change their mondern lives for.... Ever"

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"Plot: Long, long ago, in medieval times, there was war between anthros (animals with human-like bodies, much like animatronics) and dragons (because I don't know) until one anthro bonded with a dragon. Now, in modern day, there are people known as Dragon Riders who roam the Earth. Destiny will find different people and change their lives forever.")

("Rule: YOU SHOULD KNOW THEM and You at least need to be a rider( unless we have less dragons then vice versa)"

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"Rules: 1. General RP rules.

''2. You need to at least be a rider."'')

("Orerance (AKA Rules for Dragon riders) 1 Don't use your Dragon for Chaos

2 Never Try to gain power by your Dragon

3 Always Protect your Dragon and your Dragon will protect you"

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This should probably be removed, actually. Mention it in the RP itself, but don't limit people to it. That way, you can have a group of Dragon Riders that break it - which would create a bit of conflict.)

<p style="font-weight:normal;">("Fourm, Rider:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Name:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Nickname(opinal):

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Age:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Gender:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Personality:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Type of animal:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Appearance:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Wepon:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Backstory:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Dragon (I recommend asking the RPer if you want to pair up)"

<p style="font-weight:normal;">=

<p style="font-weight:normal;">"Rider Forum:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Name:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Nickname (optional):

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Age:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Gender:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Personality:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Species:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Appearance:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Weapon:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Backstory:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Dragon (ask if you want to pair up with another RPer)")

<p style="font-weight:normal;">("Fourm, Dragon:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Name:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Nickname(opinal):

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Age:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Gender:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Personality:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Appearance:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Magic:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Backstory:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Rider(same thing ask RPer):"

<p style="font-weight:normal;">=

<p style="font-weight:normal;"> "Dragon Forum:

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Name:

<p style="font-weight:normal;"> Nickname (optional): 

<p style="font-weight:normal;"> Age: 

<p style="font-weight:normal;"> Gender: 

<p style="font-weight:normal;"> Personality: 

<p style="font-weight:normal;"> Appearance: 

<p style="font-weight:normal;"> Magic: 

<p style="font-weight:normal;"> Backstory: 

<p style="font-weight:normal;">Rider (ask if you want to pair up with another RPer):") (Now thats some good criticism, you said it better than me man, cheers man thats the way you do it)