Board Thread:Roleplay/@comment-33989872-20180731195631/@comment-27344811-20180803161337

(AzInk, can I just... talk real, for a minute?)

(Me and Gold have been trying to make things harder for the group trying to escape. We didn't need to originally, but you tried making everything easy. We don't want it to be easy. A challenge is what makes it fun; Oswald's sub-plot depends on other people because he can't do it alone... and now we dwell onto the sub-plot. A sub-plot is a plot inside the plot. My plot wasn't including everybody, just a few. I was gonna let you do your own thing but.... you decided you wanted in. That was fine, but... you didn't ease your way in, you forced your way in. Jackson and FOxtrot shouldn't have thought they were escaping. They should not have been able to get out through the vents- this is a top-secret facility, they would have the vents covered. I don't know if this wife character is the "she" from the summary or a character you made up on a whim, but I don't think this solves this.)

(Your RP has potential, but you don't understand how things work. Take a megacorporation- if the father was your boss, would you outrank everyone else? No! That's not how things work. Especialy when you are just a security guard. Jackson shouldn't have that much control over the facility... and he needs to learn that. You can't just have them do whatever ou want, there's order to a rp like this.)

(I also had a thing in mind whch would not only make the escape plot include everything, but include what I thught the main plot was as well. When you canceled the FBI event, that was a flag for me... that wasn't pointess. THe FBI added to the urgency of an escape...)

(Look, can you just let me work with this one thing, so we can get back on track for what you originally intended? Is that okay?)