User blog:LunarExplosion/Critique?

Hey guys. So, I have this story I want to put up, but I don't know if it's okay. It's about three teenagers named Jacob, Hannah, and Robyn. They each have a FNAF toy from a long time ago (let's say about eight years back). The toys come to life and, well, the teens have to keep a secret.

So what do y'all think? I think it just feels like Doc McStuffins with the toys replaced with FNAF toys just to get approved here. But I wanna know what you guys think. Yes or no? :)