Thread:Neon1Umbreon/@comment-26889090-20170607222751/@comment-29194274-20170607223714

Now I'm going ti nitpick a bit. It's just me trying to help you with your artwork, and I know you're doing it online.

1.) I can tell it is Frisk, and thus the hair is too long for them.

2.) I'm going to assume you drew Frisk as a female and thus the shape of the body is off. For males and females shoulders are always wider then the head, and assuming Frisk is a younger child (7,8) you could get away with a slight curve probably and the legs are much too long.

3.) The eyelashes are out of proportion by a lot. If you make them look more female small eyelashes could definitely fly, or even none at all. A character doesn't have to have eyelashes like that to be female.

That's all.