Board Thread:Roleplay/@comment-26892768-20180703235416/@comment-33141717-20180705013327

IronBoy88 wrote: (Okay, I know you probably mean well but...

You need to work on hat character. A lot.

It's a self-insert and frankly not a very well-done one so far.

Also

Parenthesis for OOC.) If your talking to me, I litterally have ble coat on....and I forogt to add some other details..